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Alice's Story 1

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Sirens scream, flashing blue and red lights that break through the silence of the black street along with dimly lit street-lamps. Police officers and EMPs burst through the giant white doors being led by doctors in white lab coats.
"She's this way," said one of the doctors. "I hope it's not too late".
A female EMP replied under her breath, "Me too".
When they had gotten to the door the doctor unlocked it. Quickly the EMPs ran in working quickly. She was lying on the floor unconscious and not breathing. Her lips had started to turn a faint blue color. A shoddy noose made from what used to be a draw-string still hung from the ceiling of the room.  They worked as fast as they could, trying to get her to breathe. After 10minutes, they stopped trying. With dropped faces they got up and left the room. The female EMP walked up to a woman who was crying, looking about 25years old. She was the sister of the girl that lied lifelessly in the room and gave her a note.  
"We found this on her body. I figured that it'd be best if you read it first before the police," said the EMP softly. The woman nodded and took the note from her. They hugged and then the EMP hurried off back to the ambulance. The sister walked to the front desk to collect her sister's things.
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I had to write a Narrative for English. Tell me what you think. more to come. Is someone willing to edit this series for me?
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